Transformations a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

TRANSFORMATIONS
perceived
  daydreams
a flas
of
the conscious
  conceived

a sudden
  salience
sufaces
causuality
  creates
i. a
state
of emergence

a poesis
 realised
in a
  vision
of the
infinite

dissolving
  dissipating
    diffusing


a flurry
 of simple
speech
a frothy
 excitement
of concrete
things
epithets
  decorative
thrills
so
bright
yet
flash
 senility

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