Transformations a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

TRANSFORMATIONS perceived daydreams a flas of the conscious conceived a sudden salience sufaces causuality creates i. a state of emergence a poesis realised in a vision of the infinite dissolving dissipating diffusing a flurry of simple speech a frothy excitement of concrete things epithets decorative thrills so bright yet flash senility

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