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Transfixed

Transfixed, suspended, as geese caught in overnight ice awaiting dawn and sun's warmth. Static, lost in a dream I can't remember but never really forget.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 5/4/2015 7:20:00 AM

Oh I like the image you created here, it's perfect.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/5/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, one of those images that came, I jotted it down and let it be.

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 8:43:00 PM

David, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/5/2015 2:24:00 PM

Thanks Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2015 7:50:00 PM

Dave, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/5/2015 2:23:00 PM

Thanks Linda, It is funny with the short ones, we dash then off and mostly forget about them - until ......

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/27/2014 10:10:00 AM

It makes me think of a tale where a flock of geese stuck in a lake all flew together and lifted the lake to another location.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/27/2014 10:17:00 AM

Thanks, I hadn't heard that one, but have heard that if ice is thick enough foxes can have a great morning.

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2014 10:36:00 AM

Nice one!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/16/2014 11:53:00 AM

Thanks