Transfixed

Transfixed, suspended,  
as geese caught in overnight ice
awaiting  dawn and sun's warmth.
Static, lost in a dream 
I can't remember
but never really forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
May 4, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Oh I like the image you created here, it's perfect.
Rodgers Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thanks Casarah, one of those images that came, I jotted it down and let it be.
A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:43 PM
David, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Rodgers Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Thanks Skat
A   Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 7:50 PM
Dave, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
Rodgers Avatar
May 5, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Thanks Linda, It is funny with the short ones, we dash then off and mostly forget about them - until ......
Lamoureux Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 10:10 AM
It makes me think of a tale where a flock of geese stuck in a lake all flew together and lifted the lake to another location.
Rodgers Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thanks, I hadn't heard that one, but have heard that if ice is thick enough foxes can have a great morning.
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Nice one!
Rodgers Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Thanks
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