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Transcending Space

A chill, like breath from the edge of time, Brushed my skin, whispered, “You are mine.” Through dark silence, your soul reached through, Awakening mine I had to answer you. It stirred my being, disturbing my sleep A slumber profound, calm and deep How could I reason this mystic call One soul reaching out claiming it all A pull as strong as the moon on the tide Drawing me closer no where to hide Compelled to answer I couldn’t resist As though our bond could still exist A link unseen yet so firmly tied Inviting me where your soul resides Perhaps we’ve danced thru lifetimes past With a love so real, one pure that lasts A love untouched by death or despair Its echoes still linger suspended in air Two halves seeking their destined embrace Defying the void transcending space

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Date: 12/21/2024 12:18:00 PM
What a lovely romantic poem. Im not good at writing romantic poems, mine always end up sounding sad but not the way l want them to be, very strange. thank you for sharing your well written Rhyme. Jx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2024 6:50:00 PM
Oh thank you for your lovely feedback :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2024 6:49:00 PM
Awe see romantic is so easy for me.. for the most part…but we always think our work sounds childish if you will lol! I think mine sound sappy:)

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