Transcending Space

A chill, like breath from the edge of time,
Brushed my skin, whispered, “You are mine.”
Through dark silence, your soul reached through,
Awakening mine I had to answer you.

It stirred my being, disturbing my sleep 
A slumber profound, calm and deep 
How could I reason this mystic call
One soul reaching out claiming it all 

A pull as strong as the moon on the tide 
Drawing me closer no where to hide 
Compelled to answer I couldn’t resist 
As though our bond could still exist 

A link unseen yet so firmly tied 
Inviting me where your soul resides 
Perhaps we’ve danced thru lifetimes past 
With a love so real, one pure that lasts 

A love untouched by death or despair
Its echoes still linger suspended in air
Two halves seeking their destined embrace
Defying the void transcending space

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Date: 7/21/2025 12:06:00 PM
I agree...it is a well written rhyme. Deserving of comment. Nicely penned, Poetess. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/31/2025 3:33:00 AM
Thank you John! I always did luv when you read me;)
Date: 12/21/2024 12:18:00 PM
What a lovely romantic poem. Im not good at writing romantic poems, mine always end up sounding sad but not the way l want them to be, very strange. thank you for sharing your well written Rhyme. Jx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2024 6:50:00 PM
Oh thank you for your lovely feedback :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/21/2024 6:49:00 PM
Awe see romantic is so easy for me.. for the most part…but we always think our work sounds childish if you will lol! I think mine sound sappy:)
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