Transcendence

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Transcendence, subtle shift within It’s unmistakable As a bliss mist, distanced from sin Love flame unshakable It’s an open secret No one else may ferret Graced as of soul’s merit God parlance Transcendence 06-January-2022 Quietus

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Valsa George

Date: 1/7/2022 8:05:00 PM

Profound and thoughtful. "A bliss mist", "love flame unshakable."... They tell it all... A great write, dear poet friend !

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/7/2022 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa! So happy you enjoyed!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/6/2022 3:57:00 PM

The ascendence of transcendence is surely resplendent. ~ Taking the high road

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/6/2022 6:54:00 PM

Wow! Your comment outshines the poem! Thanks, GW

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/6/2022 9:16:00 AM

A poem full of meaning. They seem to come easy to you, not like me.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/6/2022 6:53:00 PM

Hahaha! Let’s admit though, that this poem may fail the rhymezone check. Tsk tsk. Abandon the forks and knives folks, eat with your hands!