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Tranquillity

She was restless, Disturbed by almost Everything. Wandering in search of Serenity. Somewhere, She met him, And found tranquillity. And that was all She needed.

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Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 10/9/2017 9:42:00 AM

Wow. So deep a poem. It speak about a peaceful fulfilment when you meet what you have been searching for. God bless you . Keep it up.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/9/2017 8:33:00 AM

Ohh so beautifully written and poetically expressed Saniya! Very lovely poetry indeed. Truly enjoyed! A warm welcome to Poetry Soup!! :)

Saniya Khot
Date: 10/9/2017 8:37:00 AM

Thank you much. Comments like these makes me feel so honoured and so so better. Thank you. :)

Darren White

Date: 10/5/2017 1:43:00 AM

I think I would call this Free Verse instead of Prose Poetry, but I agree the line between is blurry. I like this, the assonance and alliteration, as well as the message. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)

Saniya Khot
Date: 10/5/2017 1:46:00 AM

Yeah. I made a mistake with that. And thank you so much :) I'm Just a beginner. Don't know much about the types of poetry.