Tranquility

~Tranquility~
 
Cozy and hot outside!
Two symbols of these worlds collide

Eluding eclipse effect and becomes worldwide,
Sinking every lover's heart from the inside 

Unhappy endings, one massive clutch-less ride
Emotions fly, like a veggie glide.
 
Under this new moon and sun's high tide.
God, must have a new evil plan set aside!

:)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:02 PM
i feel like a pill lol **SKAT**
Davis Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 9:52 PM
PD This is a strongly written poem with a lot of deep meaning. Very intense and powerful. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem.
Bono Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 8:40 AM
sometimes I think GOD has some evil plans to see how strong we really are.good day to you.take care
Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 9:55 PM
Marvelous mono-rhyming! I love '...one massive clutch-less ride,' and '...a veggie glide.' Reall well done, PD!! Best wishes, Keith
Onclaud Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 7:51 AM
hi PD.. is this for my contest?.. thanks!.. i was asking for a new poem with the main title " selene" on it... a radiant piece---maybe we can do something like tweak it or send something fresh from the oven?... looking forward with thrills from you!... got only 3 entries before the game closes; hurry!..:) hugs and love!
Fraser Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 1:34 PM
The Sea of Tranquillity graced by the sun as it's eclipsed. Fine poetry pd :)
Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:04 PM
You know, my P.d., at some point you simply must try rhyme and do a sonnet or a quatrain because I KNOW that you would be quite good at it and you would surprise yourself. You would NOT shock me, because reading things like this makes me KNOW that you can achieve fine things in that style. Regards, Gerard.
Taylor Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Long time no comment. Sorry for my absence from the soup. I have returned for the most part. My first read since I have been back and Wow, you never disappoint me. I just feel that I will alway adore your writing. Great Work. On to the next piece.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 2:45 PM
knew it would be just a matter of time before the 'haters' attacked but u continue to run the contests fast and furious my BFF PD... see my blog comment to u... some exitement down here at seashore today.. sadly an 11 year old girl fell from top of ferris wheel and was instantly killed on a school trip..so getting to my commenting late in the day .. the police closed the pier where it happened .. so tragic luv.. keep up the good flow .. your BFF forever.
Bishop Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:36 PM
wonderful poem P.D as always :)
Minardi Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Did you talking about Eclipse from twilight thingy??? Just a thought P.D. :) This is entertaining though.. xo
Trevino Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:36 AM
I miss you P.D., love Royal =(^.^)=
Patanawiroj Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 4:19 AM
good job
Merritt Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Good shyt
Ivy D Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:58 AM
Veggie glide' lmfao 'S'
Song Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 11:02 PM
Check out this song--Never Alone by Barlow Girl I just love the lyrics for where I have been recently in my life! It is so poetic! Hugs, girl! Gwendolen
Foulk Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 8:54 PM
thank you P.D. for commenting on Breezes on the Lake.
Ehrhardt Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Interesting, but I also question the veggie glide. the power of an eclipse is intense.
Agtani Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 11:53 AM
P. D. You made me think on this poem, underneath the line is tranquility despite of unhappy endings?? Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for following mine too. Dalila
Johnson Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:45 PM
Yes Destroyer;P.D Returned , re saw the tortured more, as lovers heart's subside, me clutch it slips, the boofhead bitch, i don't want suicide:) thanks babe...xo...Don
R Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Great monorhyme, PD! But what does 'veggie glide' stand for? Didn't quite understand...But good poem! Hugs, Emilia
Mclaughlin Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Great Pen P.d...Smiles :)
Long Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 5:23 PM
this is wonderfully written, have a great holiday weekend cory
Clark Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Great Poem. great rhyme
Yamin Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Amazing poem. I like it. Thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem My Departed Friends. You are very kind. -Mohammad
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