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Tranquil Waters

Tranquil Waters
Steady goes the stream of pure tranquility Clear blue water rushes over smooth polished rock The landscape is so green near this water of fertility To this mountain lake nature's Beings tend to flock All the sounds of nature make it so peaceful here Admiring from above this breath taking treetop view The frigid waters look so very pure and clear Dazzling with its very own enriched color of blue The wind is dead calm stirring no ripples in the glass Watching the colorful fish in their under water dance Blue ones, pink ones, red sunfish, trout, and bass All together in this classical mountain top lake romance The sound here is so silent exemplifying the word peace A world full of panic never touches the beauty of this lake Here there is no need for armies, government, or police It is so sad the things for granted we as humans do take
05/17/17 Submitted for poetry contest: "Mountaintop Lake"

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Date: 6/12/2017 7:50:00 PM
wonderful flow of poem and well described ,Brian, congratulations on your win ~*
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Brian Davey
Date: 10/18/2017 3:38:00 PM
Thanks Eve always a pleasure to hear words of praise too you
Date: 5/19/2017 10:33:00 AM
John is right, it's a beautiful winner for me, Brian:) deserves more than a 7:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/19/2017 4:04:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much it really makes me happy to hear that you enjoyed it this much, it is what makeshe writing it worth it!
Date: 5/17/2017 10:56:00 AM
Great imagery Brian, this should do well in the contest!
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/17/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thanks John hopefully it will do well I enjoyed this write
Date: 5/17/2017 4:15:00 AM
Great images Brian and you're right about what we take for granted. Good luck in the contest.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/17/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you very much my friend

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