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Tranquil Shores

Subsiding currents,
Caressing the edge of land:
Peaceful evening surge.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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Charmaine Chircop

September 6, 2009 at 11:30 AM

Serene Haiku.........it relax the mind....very peaceful indeed..excellent Raul--Charma

September 4, 2009 at 11:51 AM

Dreamy froth topped waves caressing the sands and shores, quite a picture this Haiku paints Raul>>James

September 2, 2009 at 3:35 PM

Such serenity in this poem. I feel at peace when I'm by the shore so this one speaks to me. Uplifting view. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2009 at 12:01 PM

Another fasinating write Raul. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

September 2, 2009 at 8:59 AM

Peaceful evening surging..my goodness that is pure beauty..good work.

September 2, 2009 at 8:12 AM

Thank you for your blog comments today Raul.Rgds Brian

September 2, 2009 at 7:07 AM

Beautiful and softly written piece of elegance Raul. Soup mail returned!

Deirdre Omaidin

September 2, 2009 at 5:29 AM

This is wonderful, really depicts the last of a raging storm for me. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidiín

James Peranteau

September 2, 2009 at 3:11 AM

Raul,...I feel the cool last touch on mine toes,.. I'll forever remember this Haiku at mine trips to the shore ! Thanks for this one Sir ! james

September 2, 2009 at 2:26 AM

Wonderful images Raul. Feels like you are there.

September 2, 2009 at 2:02 AM

I love this one. I can feel the pull of the ocean. Sara

September 2, 2009 at 1:58 AM

Great haiku , as ever , Raul ......

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