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Tranquil Shores

Subsiding currents, Caressing the edge of land: Peaceful evening surge.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/6/2009 11:30:00 AM

Serene Haiku.........it relax the mind....very peaceful indeed..excellent Raul--Charma

James Fraser

Date: 9/4/2009 11:51:00 AM

Dreamy froth topped waves caressing the sands and shores, quite a picture this Haiku paints Raul>>James

Date: 9/2/2009 3:35:00 PM

Such serenity in this poem. I feel at peace when I'm by the shore so this one speaks to me. Uplifting view. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2009 12:01:00 PM

Another fasinating write Raul. Love, Carol

Christopher Higgins

Date: 9/2/2009 8:59:00 AM

Peaceful evening surging..my goodness that is pure beauty..good work.

Brian Strand

Date: 9/2/2009 8:12:00 AM

Thank you for your blog comments today Raul.Rgds Brian

Charlene Bird

Date: 9/2/2009 7:07:00 AM

Beautiful and softly written piece of elegance Raul. Soup mail returned!

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/2/2009 5:29:00 AM

This is wonderful, really depicts the last of a raging storm for me. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidiín

James Peranteau

Date: 9/2/2009 3:11:00 AM

Raul,...I feel the cool last touch on mine toes,.. I'll forever remember this Haiku at mine trips to the shore ! Thanks for this one Sir ! james

John Thomas

Date: 9/2/2009 2:26:00 AM

Wonderful images Raul. Feels like you are there.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2009 2:02:00 AM

I love this one. I can feel the pull of the ocean. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/2/2009 1:58:00 AM

Great haiku , as ever , Raul ......