Tranquil Puddle

A tranquil puddle 
that has yet to see a childs 
feet stomp within it 
is a sad and lonely thing 
A gleeful splash will change that
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 15, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Funny, i don't know weather you have seen the vicar of dibley? this poem makes me laugh, if you have not seen it, a large women jumps into a puddle thats so deep it swallows her whole! love Simone
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March 15, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Love the story, the personification of a puddle, I'm not sure it's Haiku, but it is a great poem.
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