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Tranquil Puddle

A tranquil puddle that has yet to see a childs feet stomp within it is a sad and lonely thing A gleeful splash will change that

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2010 6:40:00 AM
Funny, i don't know weather you have seen the vicar of dibley? this poem makes me laugh, if you have not seen it, a large women jumps into a puddle thats so deep it swallows her whole! love Simone
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:39:00 AM
Love the story, the personification of a puddle, I'm not sure it's Haiku, but it is a great poem.
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