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Tranquil Pool

A once tranquil pool starts to shudder in the winds Distorting it's calm Within the winds come a blanket of soft blossoms Hosted by nature Cast upon the water to create a kaleidoscope of shapes and movements As the pool grows calm Movements become less frantic shapes do coalesce

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Date: 2/16/2018 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful imagery. Well done, Paula.
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Date: 2/3/2010 8:42:00 AM
Like the way you brought tranquility to this pool in the sequential haikus, Paula. Nice work! Love, carolyn
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