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The Trance I sit on my stationary bike for half an hour a day, it is incredibly boring if I have nothing to occupy my mind. Today there was a stream of thought I waded out but found it full old junk – junk can also be new- so I built a wall of numbers to keep the rivulet away. I fell into a trance, or think I did; an hour had past when I looked at the watch, an hour had gone a new record. The pressure of the flowing thought broke the wall and sceptical I was not sure if I had had my exercise or been asleep on the bike?

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Date: 12/13/2017 6:04:00 PM
I think you were tired and fell asleep on your exercise It sounds like you fell asleep on your exercise bike. Although I really can not see this happening.
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Jan Hansen
Date: 12/14/2017 7:01:00 AM
thank you Darlene De Beaulieu

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