Traits

Child God’s gift Cries or Smiles Loves to Play Around Innocence Flowers Many Colors Smiles at You Lights up the Garden Radiance Bird Flies high Flaps its wings To reach the stars Dreams Ants Work Hard Walk in Line One behind the Other Team Lantern Gives light Shows the Way I found the Path Serenity Temple God’s Abode Hands Fold Together Pray for Well-being Faith

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/6/2010 1:51:00 PM

Love this one of yours, Suresh ! Unique perspectives on nature and Lanternes. I shall put it in my favs to meditate on it more. It seems to inspire me somehow. Thanks for sharing it. -Robert

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/21/2010 10:39:00 AM

wonderful set of lanternes, much enjoyed

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2010 10:41:00 AM

Good afternoon Suresh. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2010 2:17:00 PM

Enjoyed your great work...I especially like the last one stanza..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2010 11:45:00 AM

Suresh, what a beautiful series of lanternes!! I especially love the onles about the temple and the "lantern." Very spiritually uplifting. Thank you for sharing these with us! Love, carolyn