Training Session

flashing red lights
red and white stripes
crossing the road
where tracks are laid
whistle so loud
heard by the whole town
the warning the engineer played

steel wheels running on rails
pushing and pulling
staying on the trail
clu cluck clu cluck clu cluck
the heart beat of a living train
mixing with the whistle
and engine blair

from my car i saw the cars
that followed the engine 
of the train
and started counting
one by one
as they whistled by
and into the plain

cars that carried coal
everyone the same
except the ones with graffiti
usually some ones name
there were cars that carried cars
and tanks with propain
boxes they could put on truck
and back on trains again

there were some old box cars 
that were empty
doors slid open wide
so inviting to a hobo
who could just jump inside

i thought about the places
the bridges the train crossed
the places i'd like to see 
before the time is lost
the mountains the rivers
and the plains the train crossed
then i saw the Eden men thought
they'd lost
spread out in the places
that very train crossed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Rider Avatar
September 20, 2008 at 6:48 PM
Nothing like being whisked away on a mental vacation by the steal wheels rolling down the tracks. This is very nicely written John. Thank you for commenting on my poetry also!
Feist Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 10:26 AM
Enjoyed this heart-beating, blood flowing poem, alive with sounds and views of the countryside! My brother was just yesterday talking about hopping the freights when we were kids. Times have changed but your gift of pen and ink has managed to keep another memory alive for me! I can't wait to show this poem to my brother Jack. Thanks for writing it. love, karen
Winter Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 4:26 PM
Hi John. Well wow, first of all, thanks for that incredibly kind comment. I appreciate it very much. The rhyme and flow of this poem is amazing. The message here is quite beautiful. I've always loved trains, and the imagery and whole atmosphere to the poem is extremely well expressed. I feel like I am on one, looking out in awe and wonder of our beautiful land. The continual repeating sound of the train is like a universal heartbeat. Awesome write! Love, Shar
Tanaskow Avatar
August 11, 2008 at 2:57 AM
sound like a sad trip to me.
Lokken Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 6:30 PM
Interesting perspective on trains...so many words to describe a small subject matter. Very creative.:) Regards, Sara
Jordan Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 8:23 AM
John - very beautiful poem - Loved the little heartbeat of the train - the imaginary in this poem was excellent - Great Job and God Bless - Thank you for your past comments and I'm feeling better every day so I'll keep my eyes open for your writing - God Bless John
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