Train of Thought

I sit in the back of a traveling train 
The exit to the left guides me to the thoughts in my brain 
So hop on board to take a ride 
On the train of thought with me to see what's inside 

You might not be prepared for what you see
One image starts a thousand mile journey 
Of all the years that pass me by
A thousand miles to go until I die

This train offers not a sunset view 
Nor a peek of the world layed out before you 
The only thing offered like I said 
Are thoughts like à hurricane swirling around in my head 

For me it's out of sight out of mind 
But on this train I'm surprised by what I find
That being said this train isn't to guide
It's to show you memories I store inside 

A penny for your thoughts because your thoughts I want to know
As I continue my life, this train will continue to go
I really want to see all that this life has in store for me 
Because there's plenty to miss on a thousand mile journey 

Someday the pennies for thoughts shall be no more to spend 
And this train ride of mine will come to an end
Enjoyed the ride now I'm ready to go
Laying my head on the ground as I rest my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/25/2019 10:45:00 AM
some very deep thoughts... i feel the same when im on a train.. mind drifts in so many directions... great poem..
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