Train

I ride the train of thought through the cosmos and the heavens I ride it through the milky pastors where night and day lasts forever I ride it all the way to the end of the line I ride it all the way to the end of time.

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Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 9:21:00 PM

Hendri, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Hendri Schreuder
Date: 8/7/2015 10:02:00 AM

Thanks so much SKAT!

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:35:00 AM

Hendri, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Hendri Schreuder
Date: 8/1/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thanks so much SKAT! I've always been apprehensive of sharing my writing with others but then I found this site and I was like "What the hell." Your support means a lot. I'm a filmmaker studying/working in Cape Town but am interested in all forms of art, especially written ones. Thanks again for your warm welcome.

Richard Craig

Date: 7/30/2015 6:41:00 AM

cute