Train

The railroad cars rumble 
they tremble, pushing forth
tracks of steel guide the way
tons of heavy cargo
tired passengers gaze out
trees whisk past their windows 
trekking towards the sun. 











A Pleiades Poem
9/30/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Love those last three lines…some great writing!
Leiser Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 11:57 AM
Thank you, Kim! I’m so glad you liked this! :)
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