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Train

The railroad cars rumble 
they tremble, pushing forth
tracks of steel guide the way
tons of heavy cargo
tired passengers gaze out
trees whisk past their windows 
trekking towards the sun. 











A Pleiades Poem
9/30/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 10/3/2022 11:51:00 AM
Love those last three lines…some great writing!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/3/2022 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! I’m so glad you liked this! :)

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