Trails of Stars

twilight 
in the palms
of my hands
awaiting
the trails
of stars
awakening
to carry
wishes whispered
of moonlit kisses
adrift on the wings
of dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Poetry on wings, that's what this is, Sandy! Just gorgeous. I love every image, every line, every word! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Adams Avatar
November 10, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thank you my friend...see, sometimes my muse gets these softer tones...i just feel i do sad deep poems better.... hugs
Gondolf Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 9:36 AM
"wishes of moonlight kisses adrift on the wings of dreams" This is so beautiful, Sandy, soft and dreamy. Hugs, John
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so very much John :) hugs
Warrior Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 8:20 AM
Happy! trails Sandra...lovely verse my friend...read on a comment that you're Italian...ciao bella, come stai?...the Italian stallion warrior lol...^WW^ :o)
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:51 PM
is your family from italy? my grandparents came to the usa from Casalduni provincia di Benevento.i still have family there that i sometimes talk to on facetime when i am with relatives that also came here...i would love to go over and see where they came from and have to pay for nothing but my flight when i do...i just fear i may not want to come back here...from what i see it's gorgeous there... thank you WW
Mcintosh Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Beautiful. I love it. God bless you, sweet friend, Gina
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:39 PM
thank you so much Gina :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Soft like a whisper and floats like a feather, such a beautiful poem that comforts the heart and brings a smile to the reader. Simply beautiful my friend.
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much my friend...i appreciate your kindness always :) hugs
Michael Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 5:01 AM
"adrift on the wings of dreams" I like this...
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much Arturo :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 12:24 AM
Delightful, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Line :)
Sands Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 10:57 PM
Very nice Sandra. I enjoyed this tonight :)
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Thank you so much Heidi :) hugs
Anish Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:26 PM
Beautiful dream like images here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Adams Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Thank you so much Matthew :) hugs
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