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Trails and Trials

look around you can always find a bread crumb or piece of string some have been compromised suddenly stop when with any food trail come hungry animals including people unknowingly eat what may have led to your destiny victory in death following back the string path after killing Minos' son Minataur or from the cookie jar crumbs that may lead to death in the candy house in the witch's oven but above all what paths before me lay on display i can't say any of them spell fate they all seem benevolent and meant for me to be enlightened lighting what was once a dead end darkness now intended to shine and show me a way of trans cendence evident by names such as Maureen and Melissa and another Melissa Mark Sean Don and Dooley blessed be

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Date: 12/13/2019 12:16:00 PM
A true poet lets life inspire them as you have in this charming poem Jeff. Lovely! Mele Kalikimaka! : ) xxoo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/13/2019 1:50:00 PM
aloha
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/13/2019 12:28:00 PM
I am repeating this thanks to the three of you that have commented on my poem. You each took different views but basically one in the same; and so I think of my friends, and your comments bring real tears to my eyes. Thank you all.
Date: 12/13/2019 11:59:00 AM
You seem to me to be a fella who takes the road less traveled. Life is much more interesting that way. Nice poem. Stay frosty my friend.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/13/2019 12:28:00 PM
I am repeating this thanks to the three of you that have commented on my poem. You each took different views but basically one in the same; and so I think of my friends, and your comments bring real tears to my eyes. Thank you all.
Date: 12/13/2019 11:34:00 AM
Jeff, you have made fairy tales seem doable. Well done!
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