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Trailing An Ant Over You

An ant's journey over you trailing it to have its view your toe to hair. Leaving its friends in the queue it thought to do something new so it's now here. Marching past few morning dews seeing your nail polish's blue grabbed without fear. Climbing your toe with much care started a journey so rare on your leg straight, silky skin so smooth and bare I followed it with some fear before it's late, curvy path starts just from here mountain,valley here and there best tour till date! Guessing the paths lie in wait feeling my increased heart rate told it,'Hey stop!' But without changing its gait the ant moves towards target to climb the top. It just told me,'Don't be late, keep part of tour top secret or you'll be dropped!' ************************** *** Contest:Virelai Sponsor:David Williams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 12:45:00 PM
Love it!! Congrats, Kash! A marvelous win and fun take on the contest...love and blessings
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:33:00 AM
Great take on this poetry form. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the ANTicipatorial journey and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:14:00 AM
yehey, congrats on your marvelous win, kashi bud!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 5:45:00 AM
congratulations on this super win Kash , happy to share this spot with you xx
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:40:00 AM
Great poem and win..congrats, Kash! Jag
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:12:00 AM
Kash, huge congrats on your winning poem, a very funny one and superbly written, well done...David
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Date: 7/3/2012 5:30:00 AM
haha, this is a funny one, Kashinath!! Another full body "touring" poem, but this time from an ant's point of view. Very clever way to do the Virelai!! I'm so impressed how you are mastering various forms!
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Date: 7/2/2012 7:24:00 PM
wow Kash who knew an ant had such a life.. u did a marvelous write here luv.. best wishes always.. a winner for sure.. luv..
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Date: 7/2/2012 12:30:00 PM
This is quite the clever write Kash! I enjoyed this wondrous poem with all the quirky ways of an ant! I had fun reading it! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/2/2012 12:24:00 PM
Very interesting format... good poem... Terry (& good luck)
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