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Tragic Love

 
(Christine) And in my dreams he sings to my young soul, he is darkness, passion, lust, and he is beautiful. He is obsession, danger and desire, hiding in labyrinth catacombs his disfigured face, a scar I do not see. He lives his shadowy existence, feared by all behind a mask he hides. He is the Phantom of the Opera, the grand Paris Opera House. He has taught my voice to sing, sweet and strong, while terrorizing all who care for me, yet, I cannot resist his love. He has created an underground palace, dazzling. Yet, there is another who offers me romance, he is handsome and has a quiet safety to offer me, so, I must turn away, my love. He is the Phantom of the Opera, the grand Paris Opera House. (Phantom) Go, forget me, let me go, it is over. _______________________________ November 13, 2016 Poetry/Lyric/Tragic Love Copyright Protected, ID 16-849-707-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Phantom Lyrics Sponsor, The Seeker Inspired by the song, Phantom Of The Opera(it made me weep) and the book written by Gaston Leroux, 1910, Horror Novel Sixth Place
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Keuter Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Love the second couplet... Congratz with your win.. Miranda
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations Constance, fine work...
Y. Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Congrats, Constance!
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Richards Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:59 PM
You have taken on the persona of Christine perfectly, Constance !! Well done, and Congratulations !!
Daniel Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:21 AM
A great lyric for the contest, Constance:)
Sathasivam Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 2:17 AM
A lovely write my friend. I have read books about Phantom during my school days. You did well here. Thanks for sharing it.
Peranteau Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Hello there my dear poetic friend... poor guy< double-entendre...the actual meaning of "double-entendre" was created late 17th century(French) actually meaning..."double understanding", it had nothing to do with being evasive with any sexual connotation attached, as some would have some souls believe. *Smiles.... anywho... poor guy... fantastic poesy... you really opened mine cerebral with one of my favorite stories! miss ya....much love, james
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