Tragedy In Ocean

The final hours for them,
Five people in a submarine,
Waiting for death,
Can you imagine ?

No hope in their mind,
Dying is a lesson
anyone can learn.
They teach us that lesson.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buehler Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Such a great tragedy. May God bless the families left behind.
Rolland Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 3:29 PM
thanks evelyn, i followed fours days, the tragedy, we didn't know the have died after two hours under sea, may they rest in peace, thanks for the comment, it moved me
Hind Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 3:04 PM
A scary thought. May all go well for them.
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 4:42 PM
Thanks Paige, we now know, may them rest in peace
Rodrigues Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 4:45 PM
We pray for a miracle…
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 4:42 PM
thanks Kim,
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