Tragedy In Black

Brittney Tyler
8/17/15

My life has become a living tragedy
Where once I stood proud and happy
I now hover in the shadows
Covered by a veil of black
Consumed in my jealousy
I was rainbows and butterflies before you
Now, everything is bleak
I have become a tragedy in black
Consumed by a carnal obsession
Drove mad by hurt and betrayal
Left broken and abandoned
My inner fire, extinguished
I sit and watch you move on from a distance
While I sit stuck inside the cage you trapped me in
Dark, Alone, and Broken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Inman Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 6:18 PM
Lovely sad write, Brittney.
Cwiak Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Kudos on your win with this insightful wonder.
Williams Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:53 AM
Vivid imagery. Makes me a little mad at the jerk. Thats what good writing does. Makes the reader feel. Congrats on the great win.
Tyler Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Thanks. He was a jerk lol, but his loss was my win :)
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Congratulation Brittney, great job.
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Brittney, a super congratulations on your win... SKAT
Cheema Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Congrats Britney! I loved the rainbows and butterflies imagery! Balveen
Tyler Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Everyone who knows me always tells me i'm just rainbows and butterflies all the time because of my general positive outlook on life, so I felt like I had to put it in there somewhere
Harding Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:21 AM
Excellent write! Congrats, Brittney.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:44 AM
Very wonderful write Brittney n a superb first place win! Big congrats!
Sassy Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 12:13 AM
Brittney ... love your poem and Congrats on 1st place. Beautiful and makes me feel alone and broken with you.....Sassy
Tyler Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much. :)
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