Traffic Jams--Footle

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         Hiccups
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Kash, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Hi, Kash. I forgot about this one!!! Good to see you are keeping up a little bit on Soup to know to enter this one. how ARE you?? Sure miss you. congrats here.
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:40 AM
ha ha - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 3:45 AM
wowowow! cheers for the top win, kashi.. really cool! come visit..:)
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's Footle contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Congratuations, Kash. a deserving win!
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Very creative..Congrats..Sara
Freeman Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Kashinath, Great To see you at the top, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses
Zzzzz Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Well done! Congratulations on your =1st placing! Regards, Robert.
Dufresne Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 4:44 PM
a cute one Kashinath . congratulations on this one. great win!
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Big congrats to you, Kash, on taking first place with this witty write! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of brian, kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Congrats Kash on your first place win in Brian's contest with this cool entry luv.. enjoy..
Fraser Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 3:00 AM
Koolio footle Kashinath, good luck in the contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:30 AM
wishing u a happy weekend Kash..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 12:43 AM
Hey, this is VERY creative, Kash. those stop and go's ARE like hiccups aren't they?? Clever boy!!
A   Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Kash, lol... good luck in contest,..p.d.
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 6:55 PM
A pick up hiccup!!! That is a fortune cookie type of write-NIce one, Kash. This was my first footle contest and I couldn't find too many out there when I did a lil research...now they are popping up everywhere---on this site of course!! Best 2 U! Gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 12:47 PM
So cute and witty, Kash. Aren't the footles fun? Winning wishes are coming your way, dear friend. Thank you for always being there. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 12:43 PM
I had a dog who was afraid of the Hiccups, this poem reminds me of that. you wrote a great piece here, enjoyed reading.
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Kashinath. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol
Nandy Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Someone's done it finally, nice one on traffic. good luck with the contest Kashy
Sweetheart Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:44 AM
super cool piece Kash and luv the hiccups.. good luck in the contest my friend.. glad u were thrilled with your win ..luv..
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 4:52 AM
lol, good luck for the contest Kash :)
Nutter Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:10 AM
Nice and funny
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