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Traffic Jam

Sitting here in rush hour I moan and sigh Horn’s honk, engine’s rev, a Monday to miss Birds whooshing overhead as time ticks by When from below I hear a squealing hiss The tire! Is murphy's law to blame for this?! I hop out to check and PLOP! That damn bird! I pop the hood to a clang, clunk and creak Was that the beep from the engine I heard? I grumble and groan, I just want to shriek! As cars whiz by, what a start to the week.... I start to tinker around when VvvROOM, SPLASH! Surrounded by traffic rumbling past One zooms through a puddle, my suit is trash Coolant sprays up in my face with a blast First day at the new job might be my last… July 6, 2022 Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 7/31/2022 7:09:00 AM
Hat, a great poem, sounds like a bad Monday, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 7/30/2022 7:45:00 PM
Very nice, sir. Great job.
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:40:00 PM
Well done for a place on the winning list, Hat.
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Date: 7/30/2022 12:38:00 PM
Oh what a sad tale Hat, superbly written! Congratulations on your win in Emile's contest! Linda
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Date: 7/30/2022 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Hat! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest." This contest had 34 poems entered and yet yours rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a fun contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Hat Bueckert
Date: 7/31/2022 8:48:00 PM
Thanks for the placement Emile, great contest!
Date: 7/7/2022 1:44:00 AM
Traffic Jam is inactive life; waiting for nothing; bitterness experience of meaninglessness!
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Date: 7/6/2022 2:57:00 PM
Hello Hat Bueckert, It sounds like a bad day to me. I hate it when everything goes wrong. Don't you? enjoy your day my friend.
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