Traffic Jam

Sitting here in rush hour I moan and sigh
Horn’s honk, engine’s rev, a Monday to miss
Birds whooshing overhead as time ticks by
When from below I hear a squealing hiss
The tire! Is murphy's law to blame for this?!

I hop out to check and PLOP! That damn bird!
I pop the hood to a clang, clunk and creak
Was that the beep from the engine I heard?
I grumble and groan, I just want to shriek!
As cars whiz by, what a start to the week....

I start to tinker around when VvvROOM, SPLASH!
Surrounded by traffic rumbling past
One zooms through a puddle, my suit is trash
Coolant sprays up in my face with a blast
First day at the new job might be my last…


July 6, 2022
Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
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Kitchin Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Hat, a great poem, sounds like a bad Monday, congratulations on your winning placement!
Thacker Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 7:45 PM
Very nice, sir. Great job.
Logan Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Well done for a place on the winning list, Hat.
Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Oh what a sad tale Hat, superbly written! Congratulations on your win in Emile's contest! Linda
Pinet Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations Hat! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my "Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest." This contest had 34 poems entered and yet yours rose to the top ten, you should be proud of your placing, this was a fun contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Bueckert Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Thanks for the placement Emile, great contest!
Bangalee Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 1:44 AM
Traffic Jam is inactive life; waiting for nothing; bitterness experience of meaninglessness!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 2:57 PM
Hello Hat Bueckert, It sounds like a bad day to me. I hate it when everything goes wrong. Don't you? enjoy your day my friend.
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