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Traditional Cinquain Three

Screaming towards heaven while angels sit on clouds is it possible they are not hearing I have not written one of these in a while was motivated by Drakes first cinquain. Great first attempt at this form Drake.

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Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/2/2013 3:18:00 AM

Well done true to form great write, loved the imagery, angels sitting on clouds, perfect, thanks for haring, blessings sueellen

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/31/2013 6:25:00 AM

Short and very powerful. Loved it

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 6:38:00 AM

Thanks again Monterey, you are up early as well. I got up early to work on my Knight Rises poem. Finally finished making changes to it.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/30/2013 7:11:00 AM

:) They hear...they sometimes need us to become stronger.... Lovely...as all your work is! BTW...in your notes...have not written....(present perfect tense) ;) Emphasis on the PERFECT! ;) Like your poem................

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 AM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! LOVE your MAMA! She is a sweetie pie! SO..I got to be in her role for a day! WOW! ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2013 7:51:00 AM

Ha ha, my mom told me yesterday and I was just coming to make the correction. Thanks for pointing it out.

Jack Jordan

Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 PM

No matter the form, this is a beautiful poem... jack

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2013 6:31:00 AM

Thanks Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/29/2013 11:52:00 AM

=D Well, look at this! You're very kind, Richard, thank you! This was a strong piece. Challenging & questioning the one thing that should be certain...angels. Excellently done!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Drake, glad you like it.

Colleen Bono

Date: 7/29/2013 11:13:00 AM

My angels are on vacation right now. Love Colleen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 11:23:00 AM

I hope they come back quickly.

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 7/29/2013 10:58:00 AM

Good Morning Richard . This is lovely. You are good in any form So sad! The Angels seem to be preoccupied sometimes

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Manel