Traditional Cinquain One

Sexy
little nightie
hiding special places
revealed within his desire
rising



Non traditional subject written in traditional Cinquain form
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 10:00 PM
How did I miss this one....such s beautiful sizzler....
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 12:24 AM
I forgot about this one! Thanks for refreshing my memory.
Hendricks Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Me mama taught me to read hot poetry with me eyes closed. Bravo, Richard. Go bold, bruv. lol. Nice one, my friend. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Ha ha.
Sibanda Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 3:32 PM
A tale of Hiding and Rising...I desire to see what happens to this hide-and -seek affair! Great piece.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Perhaps in another poem.
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 5:24 AM
Interesting use of Cinquain..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Thanks Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 11:55 PM
yes, now that is a CLEVER sexy little number!!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:56 AM
I am a fan of the nightie.
Hicks Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 11:49 PM
... his desire RISING. Hmm... I think I know what you're implying here! Ha ha... not what I expected you to write, but it's enjoyable nonetheless.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:57 AM
;0)
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