Tracks of Yellow Sacks

Tracks of yellow sacks

Harvested yellow sunshine to send on cart to others in sacks
A year started young with mud grey damp and ground full of cracks
Burrow for black soil rich within goodness a natural food to sow strong backs
Five months of weather stood the green waving along the brown dirty tracks
Soon yellow sunshine will give food again then the autumn come winter comes 
snaps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/29/2014 5:42:00 AM
Lovely poem Peter. It's as though you've watched the fields viewed through my windows all year! Very evocative.
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