Traces of Chalk

In the dead of night, the crickets holding their breath
Our love brooding the full moon's tide on our anniversary
The wind stirs our risen ashes and revived passion
That had remained dormant down eternity's timeline

Tonight, we're reunited once more as we'll be forevermore
Our ghosts dance in the shadows of our old, forgotten steps
Down this moonlit, memory paved path to our short lives
Past the traces of chalk where we laid holding hands side by side

Thabang J. Ngoma
08-30-2015

Nette Oclaud's Sense of touch contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 8, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thabang, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:07 PM
oh my gosh this is so beautiful. I am loving the poems this contest inspired Another fave for me. Congrats for your win.
Inman Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Great write, Thabang
Roper Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Fabulous write, Thabang, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 12:21 PM
you write with much lyricism, thabang.. i'm glad you entered this mellow piece... seems like it's the first time i encountered you... thanks for supporting my contest with my sweet congrats!
Ngoma Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Hi Nette...I'm in the habit of writing lyrics, so I guess it does come across in all my works...thank you for the win - you're a profound poet and I'm so elated. It is bordering on dark, I wasn't sure how it was going to be received...(:heers, Tbang
A. Sharma Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Very lovely Thabang! Congrats on superb win!
Ngoma Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 8:32 AM
Thanks a mil Doc as always.. (:heers, Tbang
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