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Bound by your presence A torture to erase, You have taken, a piece of my existance That cannot be salvaged. In this cold winters night Numbness, crys me to sleep. Dont wake me from, this slumber For its my only, peace. A silent cry, I weep. A fallen tear, that speaks. A lonely heart, that mourns Lingers in my speech. Im not sober in existence But transparent, in my flesh. A abandoned spirit, Now occupies, my emptiness. contest. Greatly missed Posted 6/6/2013

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Date: 9/24/2013 9:09:00 PM
This is a very touching and moving piece of poetry. Full of imagery and imagination. Good job
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:39:00 PM
Cherie, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:47:00 PM
Hi linda thanks so much, 4 commenting....appreciate it:0)
Date: 8/30/2013 7:50:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem on the home page my friend. A really moving piece! Applause!!!
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Date: 8/30/2013 9:18:00 PM
Hi M,,,thanks so much I, was pretty surpised,,, a real nice feeling:) always thankful for your lovely comments m:) xoxo cherie
Date: 8/29/2013 8:35:00 PM
"Top 100 Recent" congratulations. A very moving poem. "A abandoned spirit, Now occupies, my emptiness." Excellent ending to complete the picture of abandonment :)
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Date: 8/30/2013 7:57:00 AM
Hi karen, im surprised I didnt know it was in top 100 recent ,,,i. Truly appreciate you telling me that & thanks so much for your, generous comment it really made my day, im all smiles lol:0) big hugz ...ty again:0) ~<3~ cherie
Date: 8/26/2013 7:28:00 PM
the only place i love is peace. this is awesome piece....write more...
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Date: 8/26/2013 11:34:00 PM
Hi Neldy, yes definetly need peace:) so true. Love your comment thankyou so much I will:) blessings always cherie.
Date: 8/26/2013 12:09:00 PM
Very moving and sad, touching and beautiful. Great write. Congratulation on your poem being featured this week, With love..... Ellie
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:17:00 PM
Hi Ellie, thanks so much for your kind comment, truly appreciate your lovely comment:) cherie
Date: 8/26/2013 4:12:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week.
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:16:00 PM
Hi Dr Ram.Mehta, thanks so much , appreciate your comment, Cherie...:0)
Date: 6/10/2013 8:57:00 PM
Very sad poem here. I must say that its explosive with imagery to my eyes. Please keep posting!!!
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Date: 6/10/2013 11:45:00 PM
Thanks so much ink u script, thanks for your kind encouraging words....xx cherie
Date: 6/8/2013 3:04:00 AM
So touching and terrific. Your are such a talent. How love issues push out poetry in the depth of men. It's great to read your piece this morning, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. PoetrySoup is a pleasant platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:16:00 PM
Hi adeleke, appreciate, your very kind comment. Thanks for all the great info & warm welcome....:)
Date: 6/7/2013 11:19:00 AM
Cherie, a touching poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:10:00 PM
Thanks very much Anne, appreciate your kind comment and yes will definitely read your poems...:0)
Date: 6/7/2013 7:57:00 AM
Sad but true reality of love lost-- the title is unique to the theme-- "Traces". Nice write. Welcome to P/Soup
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Date: 6/8/2013 3:19:00 PM
Kim Thankyou also for your warm welcome, appreciate it very much...
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 6/8/2013 3:06:00 PM
Thanks very much, for commenting, really appreciate it..:)

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