Traces

A poet's journey
Is both inward and outward.
The poems he records
Along the way
Are the traces he leaves behind,
The tracks he lays down,
For him to see where he's been
And for others to follow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 7, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Whoa Jim…thats a profound write! Beautifully written and full of meaning! Debx
Slaughter Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, Deb.
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November 7, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Love this beautifully written, so poetic, poem Jim. ‘ Are the traces he leaves behind’ ‘ The tracks he lays down’ Such reflective thoughts and spoken from a true poet’s heart. So impressed that it’s going into my fav’s so I can read it often especially when I struggling with my own musings. Thank you! Blessings to you.
Slaughter Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Thank you so much, Christina.
Bauer Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:53 PM
i will gladly follow in the tracks you lay down, jim! good to see a poem of yours here today...
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November 6, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, Ilene. You're a pretty good "trailblazer", yourself.
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