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Trace Me With Your Sighs


Trace me with your sighs, 
Love me with your soul, 
Seize me with your eyes, 

Colour pink my skies, 
You, my heart have stole, 
Trace me with your sighs, 

We have lifelong ties, 
I'm yours to control, 
Seize me with your eyes, 

Give me passion highs, 
A kiss, I cajole, 
Trace me with your sighs, 

My heartbeat implies -
Through life, we will stroll, 
Seize me with your eyes, 

As one, we comprise
Affection heart-whole, 
Trace me with your sighs, 
Seize me with your eyes.

for himhusbandi lovevillanelle

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sara Etgen-Baker

May 20, 2026 at 5:06 PM

outstanding flow and snappy cadence. Easy to read...villanellas are challenging to compose but you did quite well...sending you hugs, Sara

Ink Empress

May 19, 2026 at 11:56 AM

Beautiful and lyrical, it has a catchy cadence to it which I absolutely loved dear Joanna. Your love for your husband can be felt here through your poem, he must be proud to receive such sweet poetry written for him, thank you for joining my contest. Pleasure reading and placing it in my winners list. Congratulations. Sending you light always