Toys

Fun toys Plastic truck keys Ride-on toy push with feet Tricycle, tractor, wagon, truck Corvette
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Horne Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 4:20 PM
awww, if only little Karter could read this one : )
Kyriacou Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 8:23 AM
hihi a mini trip to my childhood, I wish it were a bit longer, I always give my honest opinion, nonetheless great poem.
Hamilton Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 2:27 PM
simply beautiful Sara I love how it flows epitomised well Linda
Ivy D Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:06 PM
very nice SandyIvy
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:23 PM
I love corvette, Sara!! Glad you ended with that one
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Oh full circle..awesome Sara.
Sivey Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:52 PM
This is a wonderful experience with some awesome toys my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem, I can see that there are children in your house! My younger brother has twins and they are 3 years old (he had them at an older age) and my moms house has tons of toys, but our house has very few! Just the sign of having young children about, what a lovely piece, Great Work!!
Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:26 PM
i go zoom with the racy beat of your wonderful work, sara... winner for sure; just another cinquain and it's off to heather's... :) hugggs
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:55 PM
You never stop amazing me with your quill. Ride on Sara! AO
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Sara, this is like the "cycle" of life. We have baby toys and then graduate to adult toys like ATVs. Excellent work. I just stopped by to write to Daver, but didn't want to leave until I had a chance to read on one of your poems too. Thank you for your friendship. Love, Carolyn
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