Toys

Fun toys
Plastic truck keys
Ride-on toy push with feet
Tricycle, tractor, wagon, truck
Corvette

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2013 4:20:00 PM

awww, if only little Karter could read this one : )

Maria Kyriacou

Date: 6/1/2013 8:23:00 AM

hihi a mini trip to my childhood, I wish it were a bit longer, I always give my honest opinion, nonetheless great poem.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/31/2013 2:27:00 PM

simply beautiful Sara I love how it flows epitomised well Linda

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 5/30/2013 9:06:00 PM

very nice SandyIvy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 9:23:00 PM

I love corvette, Sara!! Glad you ended with that one

Donna Jones

Date: 5/29/2013 8:07:00 PM

Oh full circle..awesome Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/29/2013 1:52:00 PM

This is a wonderful experience with some awesome toys my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem, I can see that there are children in your house! My younger brother has twins and they are 3 years old (he had them at an older age) and my moms house has tons of toys, but our house has very few! Just the sign of having young children about, what a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2013 1:26:00 PM

i go zoom with the racy beat of your wonderful work, sara... winner for sure; just another cinquain and it's off to heather's... :) hugggs

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 12:55:00 PM

You never stop amazing me with your quill. Ride on Sara! AO

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/29/2013 12:47:00 PM

Sara, this is like the "cycle" of life. We have baby toys and then graduate to adult toys like ATVs. Excellent work. I just stopped by to write to Daver, but didn't want to leave until I had a chance to read on one of your poems too. Thank you for your friendship. Love, Carolyn

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