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Toxic State

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To claim no purpose for this toxic state, other than hate or desired submission. To find a spirit chained to the walls of circumstance, by birth and denied just cause, because of skin color. To struggle in the land of the free, trapped in a quagmire of unreasonable eyes, fighting the cold hands of society wrapped around your throat, making it hard to breathe, in the noxious gas that is this toxic state. 12/3/16 contest Toxic State

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Date: 12/25/2016 6:05:00 AM
'I can't breathe', it is so toxic. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:22:00 PM
Your reading this poem is so fantastic, you have a wonderful reading voice,
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:53:00 AM
An excellent try, congrats on top spot.
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Date: 12/23/2016 10:46:00 PM
Succinct and powerful. Congratulations on your win, sir.
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Date: 12/23/2016 7:59:00 PM
Congrats, Frederick, on your top spot.
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Date: 12/23/2016 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done :)
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Date: 12/23/2016 1:42:00 PM
7 and a Favorite. Frederick, great poem. "To find a spirit chained to the walls of circumstance" [involuntary sob] = so massively well said.
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Date: 12/23/2016 1:00:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations for you!
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Date: 12/3/2016 4:21:00 AM
That is a powerful statement, and I agree. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/2/2016 7:16:00 PM
There are all kinds of prejudices, Frederic. In this country, we practice them all. Very meaningful write. Wee written!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 12/2/2016 10:22:00 PM
our principles were built on all men are created equal, until we live that we will be divided