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Towards the Pond

Birds flew among the old oak trees Savoring melody in the breeze. Last night, it rained hard and the air was cleared. Shining vivid leaves glistened, Few fell, colorful lawn. A small sweet deer ambled downwards the winding path. Towards a small clear pond it ambled in great awe My whole being at least a consolation hath, Seeing it have a bath and play and then it saw among floating leaves tadpoles in shimmering waves . . . beware the ducklings
17 September 2020 For Constance La France's "Writing challenge, nature - four in one" contest Placed 3

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Date: 8/9/2022 3:51:00 PM
A late congratulatory comment just for you. Way to go. You did good. Sara
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Date: 10/1/2020 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Victor on your poem! It's wonderful to see animals play. I bet it's beautiful where you live. I like the way you explained the leaves bringing color to your lawn. This is an excellent poem! Peace, Angie
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Date: 9/29/2020 1:36:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 9/22/2020 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem. I am walking your winding paths. Enjoy your win.....................
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Date: 9/21/2020 3:21:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2020 6:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2020 12:27:00 PM
Such a calming write, so tranquil, so absorbing, excellent write Victor my friend. Well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/18/2020 5:55:00 PM
Why life is so calming to watch. Are used to go up on the hill with my husband to watch the wildlife and it was so beautiful excellent right
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Date: 9/18/2020 5:55:00 PM
Why life is so calming to watch. Are used to go up on the hill with my husband to watch the wildlife and it was so beautiful excellent right
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Date: 9/17/2020 10:56:00 PM
This poem caused me to breathe a sigh, it is so perfect and lovely. :)
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:01:00 PM
This is beautiful. I could see the deer walking down the forest path toward a beautiful pond for a drink and to play in the water. Great stuff. Reminded me of a film clip I saw online once of a deer in the forest. It didn't know anyone was around filming it and it kept running through a puddle just to make it splash. A sweet forest creature at play. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/17/2020 3:07:00 PM
beautiful details highlighting your stroll through nature's wonder, victor... huggs
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Date: 9/17/2020 6:30:00 AM
Stunning imagery Victor, that you compose so well. Good luck Tom
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:57:00 AM
Enjoyed the sound of this four in one beauty you wrote, Victor. Absolutely delightful imagery!
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:52:00 AM
a very interesting walk in the woods Victor. That final verse sums up nature.
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Date: 9/17/2020 4:45:00 AM
Love especially the final verse!
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Date: 9/17/2020 4:09:00 AM
I love the imagery here Victor.
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Date: 9/17/2020 2:29:00 AM
absolutely charming Victor i especially loved the imagery of the deer:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2020 2:07:00 AM
- Beautiful, Victor ... you have posted the winning poem :) - Have a lovely day ... glad you are back :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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