Tourist

I'm a tourist in your landscape 
show me every corner 
every vein

I embrace you
with new eyes 
with heart that opens 
like a paper fan 

I walk through your landscape 

It's rocky

I'm stumbling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 26, 2016 at 2:11 AM
great free verse poem, Ren. **SKAT
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March 26, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Thank you very much, Skat!:) kind of you to read and comment on my poem ....
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