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Tour Night Out

we came to town to get around we were up and down listen to the sound of the streets vendor music and beat it was a treat and we eat no doudt under b'way light TOURS NIGHT OUT

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Date: 12/26/2021 3:43:00 PM
The repetitious phrases simply didn't work for me. It seems like you are trying to get lines to cover the page. The idea has merit, but it needs a lot of work.
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