Tough*cough*

A nick across the bedroom Door







                                        My eager Love bawled out "Score!"







I told Him :"My Baby..









Not this jiffy today
                







                                       'Cause no sir,No more white on this floor"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Interesting writing here leaves me wondering. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
Loveless Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 9:50 PM
nice! and yes my last name is really Loveless... and thank you for the amazing comments!!
Loveless Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Clever Clever Nice Write
Borisov Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for your comments on my poems, Sajdah. Good luck!
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 1:28 PM
What a witty limerick, Sajdah! Great form and a delightful read. Love, Carolyn
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