Tough Nuts To Crack

we’re all born to this world with tender soft spots ~ shame fontanels harden By David Kavanagh

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/27/2021 2:52:00 PM

It is a terrible thing that we are born with sensitive, weak spots and susceptible parts, which is known as drop-down vanity, as we are all rooted in weariness. A little bit hard to assimilate as it's thought-provoking. Fantastic how a monoku can hang on to impressive connotations. Very well done, David,

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/27/2021 3:08:00 PM

Hello Lasaad, you so totally get my intended interpretation, try explain world weariness to a child, will think your nuts. It just solidifies over time like the baby’s fontanels, thank you, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 6/27/2021 7:23:00 AM

oh so clever and i love the title, of course our hearts are tender too but i guess i am being a softy lol :-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/27/2021 1:05:00 PM

Heya Jan, your a gentle heart at heart, I’m the one with the dent in my head, lol, but you get where I’m coming from on this one, cheers David