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Tough Love

Our bodies collided in the moonlight Lying under him memories held my mind hostage. As I looked up and saw his face He was watching over me. The feeling of his touch Leaves me cold and motionless. As he took back control again. Telling myself it’s just a dream No matter how real it may seem. He is just a figment of my imagination. And he cannot hurt me. My true love lies next to me As we make love one more time My memories are far behind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2012 8:29:00 PM
A strong write here, creative and emotional. I thought it said alot!
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:48:00 AM
so happy to read this creative treasure cory luv.. and luv your Avatar too.. cool .. like u .. hope all is well and school is going great..
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:47:00 AM
cory, you tok me to ravishing part of your imaginative world.. greeat job!..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/16/2012 11:24:00 AM
Indeed a powerful as well as hopeful message in this poem....Well done !!
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:10:00 AM
Cory, wow.. are you feeling the gift og God.again...a while back.. you where confused..as i am today...love your.gift...pd
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Date: 3/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
Wow Cory, powerful is an understatement for this wonderful poem. awesome. harry
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:30:00 PM
That is what came in my mind when I read this, same as Gail said below here. "powerful poem" it says so much about the feelings of a woman in this situation. REAlly great title. I love when poets use fitting titles.
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