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can melt
and dissolve,
a smile thaws the
a caress
can  brighten
eyes full of
to lips,
in embrace..
will enrich the

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 9/21/2009 11:04:00 AM
Oh, such truth, so beautifully expressed. Love the title - you are too cute. : )) Thank you dearest Brian for commenting on my poem. We finally had an offer on our house, only to be rescinded this morning. It's been a roller coaster. Hope life is treating you and yours well. Hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 9/18/2009 9:22:00 PM
Sounds like the real substance of Mary's desire, at the master's feet, Brian, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/17/2009 1:10:00 PM
Going on my favorit list. Lainie
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Date: 9/17/2009 8:29:00 AM
Very passionate short Lanterne. Sara
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:26:00 AM
A short form that reaches a long way to melt a heart!! :) Lovely writing~ Carrie
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Date: 9/17/2009 3:08:00 AM
enjoyable lanterne to begin my day!,thanks Brian!...jim
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:38:00 AM
Brian,.... Wonderful Lanterne here Sir ! A muse for the day which will sooth mine soul ! Love it ! james
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Date: 9/17/2009 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful, nice work reign at simplicity...Raul
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