Touching the Intangible With a Smile

Sweltering tears incinerate gorgeous eyes on the way to drown perfection
Vocal tendons shredded from poignant packed reverberations
Blood-spattered limbs clutch tightly touching the intangible 
Beating hope trickles through a gentle heart stroke
Lips leisurely curve and I thank God for letting me grasp life once again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/12/2009 4:08:00 PM
James, this poem touched a special place in my heart. Good job!
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:58:00 PM
James this poem is rather beautiful in the penmanship area and it certainly seems to have a rather dark side - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:20:00 PM
James good write brother..Please read your soup mail.
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