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Let’s express loving touch power delighting every family member marked by trust we can offer securing home with peace-cover against infidelity wrecker. Let’s show respect-touch in our truth-declaration as we strive to build lives with dedication teaching along virtuous instruction nurturing next generation while learning from failures’ frustration. Let’s be generous with touch of encouragement midst our care-giving engagement sharing the Saviour’s divine involvement declaring Gospel along steadfast commitment geared by His compassion-fulfillment. Let’s cheer with approval touch during work partnership along busyness of business’ entrepreneurship knowing that co-labourers aid for fruitful followership enabling the performance of faithful servant-leadership in our united blissful stewardship. Let’s guard our fellowship-touch against bond-breaking since we are brethren of same sovereign King God’s citizens with supreme celestial marking worshipping together toward heavenly trekking reproved from hypocrisy’s lurking. Let’s reach-out with our friendship-touch venture vanquishing selfishness of human nature as well as arrogance upholding discrimination-posture considering uniqueness exemplified by each culture so that genuine unity will reign upon earnest charity-gesture.
*1John 4:11 Beloved, if God so loved us, we ought also to love one another. July 15, 2021 1st place, "Touch My Heart" Rhyme Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh; judged on 7/20/2021.

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Date: 7/21/2021 2:18:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, Beata! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/21/2021 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Love how you added 1John 4:11. So True. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 7/20/2021 8:56:00 PM
Congrats ! a great poem .
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Date: 7/20/2021 9:16:00 AM
Beata, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:17:00 AM
Beautiful Beata....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:11:00 AM
Let’s reach-out with our friendship-touch venture vanquishing selfishness of human nature Beautiful thought. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2021 3:53:00 AM
Congrats on a top win. Love this and you, God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/15/2021 7:54:00 PM
Beata, you've written an excellent piece! With infidelity's disaster comes the difficulty of displaying genuine sympathy. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/15/2021 12:19:00 PM
If we take all the positive steps life can be much better! Nicely said!
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Date: 7/15/2021 5:14:00 AM
Superb write, Beata! Infedility breaks trust, testing true depths of compassion. Good luck for the contest. I’ve yet to think of something for Regina’s contest
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