Touching

Two bodies entwined...
Sultry feeling spreads quickly
Heat sparks engulfing us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/26/2012 11:49:00 AM
Delightful imagery. - Chuck
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:12:00 PM
I got goose bumps right now for some reason, after reading this.
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:01:00 PM
Nice write,Thanks for the comment on my poem being featured,It means a lot to me coming from you all of the others on here,don't consider myself that good but it gets the emotions out.Again thanks.
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:51:00 AM
Wow Hot!
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
Very sensual !! ohh myyy !!
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Date: 1/30/2012 7:20:00 AM
I can picture this. Lovely Poem!
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Date: 1/29/2012 3:33:00 PM
Thanks once again, Carol, for your kind comment. I am really enjoying my new found retirement [semi-retirement]. Publishing books and PoetrySoup give me lots to do. Love, Maureen x
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:54:00 PM
Fantastic rhythm of two entwined bodies in the form of haiku. Enjoyed and loved, bl
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Date: 1/27/2012 9:38:00 PM
Short but to the point. Lovely.
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:19:00 AM
You certainly gave me a smile reading this cause I remember when.... take care. Janet
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Date: 1/27/2012 4:17:00 AM
Very romantic and lovely Carol. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for my first place in your What I love About Poetry Soup Contest.
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Date: 1/27/2012 4:14:00 AM
Whew, the feeling is contagious Carol. Nicely written. I wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you for all your inspiring comments. Love Dalila
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:31:00 AM
Beautiful ... :)
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Date: 1/27/2012 12:15:00 AM
Hey this is one glowing write Carol,, enjoyed, also thank you for the win you awarded me it must have been quite a hard job there were so many great entry's......
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:53:00 PM
like... typo
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:48:00 PM
Carol, very very...ooo la la... sounds liek nerves just got naughty... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:46:00 PM
wow! lovely senryu, spreading passion everywhere. good luck on the contest carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 6:25:00 PM
A sensuous write .Enjoyed the read Carol.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:22:00 PM
Good title for this sensuous one, Carol! Thanks for the placement in your contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:35:00 PM
Wow, this is hot!! Feeling the flames of passion here! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:06:00 PM
steamy sultry it is true, thank you for my little place, on the ladder in your race , bit of fun yes too, thanking you....Don
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:04:00 PM
It's been too long, I can't remember......but this is lovely....
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:31:00 PM
Hmmmm There's a country/western song in there somewhere. ;) Nice job Carol. Thanks for the kind words on "what Is Love". God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:28:00 PM
Just waiting for the flame Carol. All the best in the contest - it sure has feeling!
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Date: 1/26/2012 2:59:00 PM
A very nice Senryu with a romantic touch. Hugs!Erich
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