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Touching

Two bodies entwined...
Sultry feeling spreads quickly
Heat sparks engulfing us

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Chuck Novotny

February 26, 2012 at 11:49 AM

Delightful imagery. - Chuck

Roman Chebukin

February 24, 2012 at 8:12 PM

I got goose bumps right now for some reason, after reading this.

Charles Ruble

February 22, 2012 at 8:01 PM

Nice write,Thanks for the comment on my poem being featured,It means a lot to me coming from you all of the others on here,don't consider myself that good but it gets the emotions out.Again thanks.

Maxeen Dennis

January 30, 2012 at 8:51 AM

Wow Hot!

Debra Squyres

January 30, 2012 at 8:36 AM

Very sensual !! ohh myyy !!

Michele Ortiz

January 30, 2012 at 7:20 AM

I can picture this. Lovely Poem!

Maureen Lefanue

January 29, 2012 at 3:33 PM

Thanks once again, Carol, for your kind comment. I am really enjoying my new found retirement [semi-retirement]. Publishing books and PoetrySoup give me lots to do. Love, Maureen x

Bl Devnath

January 28, 2012 at 12:54 PM

Fantastic rhythm of two entwined bodies in the form of haiku. Enjoyed and loved, bl

Roman Chebukin

January 27, 2012 at 9:38 PM

Short but to the point. Lovely.

Janet Vick

January 27, 2012 at 6:19 AM

You certainly gave me a smile reading this cause I remember when.... take care. Janet

Broken Butterfly

January 27, 2012 at 4:17 AM

Very romantic and lovely Carol. Best of luck in the contest. Thank you for my first place in your What I love About Poetry Soup Contest.

Dalila Agtani

January 27, 2012 at 4:14 AM

Whew, the feeling is contagious Carol. Nicely written. I wish you good luck in the contest. Thank you for all your inspiring comments. Love Dalila

Isa Mahrie

January 27, 2012 at 3:31 AM

Beautiful ... :)

Joe Maverick

January 27, 2012 at 12:15 AM

Hey this is one glowing write Carol,, enjoyed, also thank you for the win you awarded me it must have been quite a hard job there were so many great entry's......