Touched By Your Love

TOUCH 

Thermal breath taps my cochlea teasing an
           Oasis of cool cerulean from Eden’s bouquet.
Undulating lyrics ascend to the climax of violin strings.
            Cosseted in tender heartbeat upon a virile chest,
Happiness exudes in paramours rose water sheets.

6/27/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Carmack Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 10:56 PM
This is beautifully sweet Kim. If I was judging, this would place high. Good luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2017 at 5:02 AM
Thanks so much, Rob!
Smith Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:22 PM
That's putting a little heat in the contest, well done Kim, best wishes...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Rigoler Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Wow! Quite a lot of sensuality crammed in this acrostic (sp?), my dear! Well done. / M
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Thanks so much, Maurice :)
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:09 PM
You touch all the senses with this beauty Kim! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Green Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:02 PM
Well, there goes my chances. :) Beautiful Kim, you are so extremely talented. This looks like a winner to me.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Thanks, Chris!
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