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Touched By Your Flame

The draft came and went I wanted to sit here crying alone I nearly had a fit there Why is it that when you want something bad You can't ever touch it, not even ...so sad I wanted your sweet your kiss your desire You were so much higher the dance was so dire I did what I wanted you did away too I draft here and ponder my life is so damned I must be a fool You were so desired your touch was like fire Claimed me and melted all ice was so damned by it I know you are youthful despised by no ..one I want to be truthful desire you My blinding..sun I was burned softly not by a flame but by your simple touch so ...so much shame I wanted you badly I wanted to love I've got to be turned now and dance with you...my dove Even while knowing your touch will leave me moaning through the desperate haze I fly out of my maze and burn it down gently by the touch of your grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/9/2013 12:05:00 AM
Hello Andrey once again, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:04:00 AM
Andrey. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:51:00 PM
loved the poem i can feel your emotions nice job being featured btw
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Date: 6/4/2013 11:00:00 AM
super poem written with passion Shadow
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Date: 5/29/2013 8:12:00 PM
Nice poem. Enjoyed the write.
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Date: 5/29/2013 2:37:00 AM
Andrey, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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