Touched By You

Touched by words not witholding passion
Caressing sweet thoughts, where the light of passion flickers in the recess
of a mind once doused dorment feelings
embers ignite a language that heightens senses 
Steaming up views with articulating prose 
Enchantment growing with each line
They say what lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters 
compared to what lies within us. 
The glowing passion is but a reflection of our inner fire stoked by excitement of the new.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 23, 2011 at 8:45 PM
allie, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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July 17, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Allie. Love, Carol
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March 5, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Great metaphors.....mamma mia...very great metaphors!
Fraser Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Another delight to read Allie >> James
Segal Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 3:02 AM
Lovely poem, love Simone
Anderson Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Beautiful write, Allie. Thanks for the comments on my poem. .....Jimmy
Cheeseman Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:10 AM
I really liked this full of feeling, keep that pen flowing, touching verse indeed, thanks for your support Daniel
Sohn Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 3:45 PM
Great finishing line. Wow. Please read my poems. I'd love for a writer like you to have some input and opinion on my poems.
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Interesting descriptive write. Sara
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