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for Eve Roper's The Physical World Around Me Poetry Contest

Touched by the Wonders

I’m touched by the wonders of this great world,
like the smells, sounds and images of spring:
scent of petrichor, sight of blooming buds,
the verdant valleys, and the birds that sing.

I love summer’s warmth, sand between my toes,
taking in ocean’s smell, the seagulls’ cry;
rushing out to let waves wash over me
and watching sun sink rosy in the sky.

I’m wrapped in melancholy for a while
when autumn crisply breathes upon my face.
Crimson skies greet my eyes at eventide.
Fall’s multi-colored splendor I embrace.

In winter’s wonderland, I sometimes shiver
not just from freezing cold, but from delight
to see fields blanketed in feathered snow,
and sparkling beneath moon’s glow at night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 3:32 PM
3rd stanza, 1st 2 lines hard hitting reality feeling for me, it's unavoidable and poignantly painful nostalgia, that part of fall all the autumn poems do not make me miss. Beautifully written with splendidly appealing imagery (though, to tell on myself, seagull cries take my mind directly to 'they're gonna poop on me.' (it's happened.) I got excited by a NDE we watched last night & want to call you but I'm boring right now because I'm sleepy. Soon SOUPY
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Thanks. I tried calling you. As usual you were sleeping 😴. Haha. Can't wait to hear which one you liked .
Smith  Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 4:59 AM
The four quatrains and gently flowing rhyme give this poem a pleasing seasonal rhythm. Vivid scents, sounds, and colours bring each season to life, while autumn’s melancholy and winter’s delight add emotional depth to its celebration of nature.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Thanks for your nice comment
Rolland Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 2:06 AM
wondering oneself keeps alive, i think, your poetry does it too, thank you
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Thanks, my friend
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 1:43 AM
- The feelings that arise when we are out in nature are awe, wonder... there is always something to enjoy, Andrea :) – A lovely poem – best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Thanks. I recently discovered I had failed to ever follow you. So sorry about that. No telling which others I have forgotten to follow.
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