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Touch You Girl

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Lately I've been receiving requests to explore with my writing the more sensual side of love. Knowing love is really what you make it. I'm trying my best to present love at its best. My hope is to present it with class and not cross any lines to make it offensive to anyone. Your feedback as always is greatly appreciated and wanted. Thank you. Sincerely Ed


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Touch You Girl

Touch You Girl.

I long to hold your hand in mine and look into your eyes.
Feelings that you've given life you don't even realize
I want to taste of your sweet skin run my fingers through your hair.
I want to touch you darling run my fingers everywhere.

Drinking you like finest wine and have you on my lips.
Feel your body in my hands, my hands upon your hips.
Whisper love words to you and tell you you're so fine.
Watch you tremble in the night. I long to make you mine.

Make love to you night and day the pleasure we would find.
As I make love to your body, your heart, your soul, your mind.
Lying in the aftermath of love and it's warm glow.
Let you see inside of me and teach what you don't know.

If only you will let me. Let me enter in.
I'll leave you smiling wanting more, wanting me again
Celebrating, intoxicating right from the very start.
God I want to touch you girl, please let me touch your heart.

Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 4/14/2015 5:29:00 PM
Don't you just love poetry that says so much in 4 stanzas! Cheers!
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:39:00 PM
oops bird brain forgot the 7 - have got a drippy beak - a streaming cold - doh! hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/14/2015 3:05:00 PM
hee hee life is too short to take our little errors seriously:-) Hugs jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/14/2015 2:53:00 PM
Hahaha geesh what a pair.
Date: 4/14/2015 2:38:00 PM
Edwin this is romantic, sensual and beautifully penned - a 'class' write - it sure touched my heart:-) a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:07:00 PM
Go for it Edwin - I am sure you will write a very tasteful poem as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/14/2015 2:10:00 PM
Lol. Oh the horror!!! LOL. I just realized I forgot to post the poem! Am I nervous? Maaaybe.