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Touch - Sharon's Acrostic

Tomatoes on their cheek
Oranges in smile
Usher a morning streak
Children in the aisle
Heaven on earth awhile
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June 27, 2017

Copyright © Probir Gupta | Year Posted 2017

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June 29, 2017 at 5:58 AM

Your poems always encourage me to visualise what you are seeing Probir. With this I see you beam.

June 28, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Nice acrostic, Probir. Good luck my friend:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 28, 2017 at 3:59 AM

Delightfully done my friend, Probir! Touching!

June 28, 2017 at 6:46 AM

Perhaps not as delightfully as you do! ... But I too try to ... The rest with the empathic readers like you ... thank you ...

June 27, 2017 at 10:52 PM

I like this Probir, good luck in the contest.

June 27, 2017 at 11:16 PM

Thank you, rob

June 27, 2017 at 3:03 PM

This is sweet Probir. Nice rhyming too :)

June 27, 2017 at 11:16 PM

Thank you, Heidi ...

June 27, 2017 at 1:20 PM

Good rhyming cadence Probir, best wishes..

June 27, 2017 at 11:19 PM

Thank you, Charlie ...

Barry Stebbings

June 27, 2017 at 12:44 PM

Very nice, Probir. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry.

June 27, 2017 at 11:20 PM

Thank you, Barry ...

June 27, 2017 at 12:39 PM

This was nice Probir. I like the rhyming factor in this. Nicely done.

June 27, 2017 at 11:22 PM

Thank you, Chris ...

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