Touch Not-

Touch Not… Love was blooming, wedding. “Touch not my hair,” said the groom. ‘Twas said because he was balding. Toupee flew off in wind… Zoom! © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 18, 2010 Poetic form: Chastushka

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/18/2010 11:18:00 PM

Humor is an intelligent accomplishment - said I I see you used an abab rhyming pattern in this funny Chastushka. I can see a Russian, bold groom with an inconvenient piece of rug on his head :) Love, Iolanda

Joanna Smith

Date: 1/18/2010 2:31:00 PM

ha! i loved this one very funny and great form ;)

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2010 1:22:00 PM

Another Random thought.... Thank you for the inspiration today.... Awesome poem, good form.....:JP]